Lucy: Lincoln's right! EVER!! Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Now, let me make this clear! Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . Any bad luck? I hate fashion shows! Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. Let's go! Submit your writing. "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. I MESSED UP!!! No pun intended. On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! Then you'll be treated like irresponsible teenagers." That was my favourite bat! They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. I need to get out of here! I hate presentations! As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" Everyone awed over this.] You just mess up everything! "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. Post an update . MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. I'll keep it between the both of us. I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) - The Loud House Encyclopedia Lincoln then brought his arms back, suggesting a family hug. Even you Lisa! It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. Some sisters those ghouls are. Except for Lynn). "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" Luan added. Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Lola added, shouting. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. I was horrible to you! ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. Lincoln asked his parents. (Cries) All my precious tiaras. I heard you scream! SEE YOU NEVER!" "What do you kids want?" WE WENT TOO FAR!!! What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. I HATE THIS!!! Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! I ADMIT IT!!! He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. Spell it out alt ending7. Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! Didn't you say you would never kick us out? (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? Lincoln: "Did anything bad happen, something life threatening that I would be deemed 'bad luck'? Rita stood up and heads to the door. I let my pride get the best to me! I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. Lincoln: "Oh really." The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. Lincoln: "Coming!" I messed up and maybe i did want to support some of you guys! Why? You try dancing in this heat! Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. And if you do, I'll have you arrested! The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. They notice the huge mess of items in the yard and are horrified.). Cuts back to now. I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. Lynn: HUH!?!?! It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." Youre our brother! ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. Also, no one in the original knew about the legal consequences of locking out a minor. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! She playfully rolled her eyes. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. I know you would never label me bad luck, and youd never neglect me. I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). I wonder if the windows are locked?" "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" White hair extended ending9. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. QUIET! Lynn Sr. bit his lip for a moment, rubbed the back of his head with hand, and then sighed, "It might take a while and it might not be easy, but I'm certain we can regain their trust." Our family wouldn't be a family without-. I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. And it wasn't just her, everyone in the lobby felt it and they looked around, wondering if there was an unexplainable earthquake coming. Sam: Luna, I got your letter. They were my favourite! After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. ), Lincoln: (to the viewers) " I can't believe they actually locked me out the house, which is also my home. ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Hope you enjoy. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. "But you know what's not fair?" ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Leni: Linky.(sniffles).please don't do this to us. Lynn Sr.: Son..we never stopped loving you..we do care about you Lori: Don't hurt us like this..we're your familywe want you to be with us. Lana: We didn't mean to ruin your life..(sniffles).we just wanted to avoid bad luck..we're so sorry we went about it all wrong Luna: We get it bro.you were never bad luck..we ruined everything for youthere is no such thing as luckwe'll never live this down.. Lola: You can't hurt your own family like this.. Lincoln: You all hurt me first! WE'RE BRUTES!!! ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. I'm the Duke! ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. I was being selfish!. ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. TLH: Scoop Snoop (Alternate Ending) by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt "Not cool, guys." After a few moments of static, a female voice was heard on the other end, "Hello, Felix. ", (Lynn starts running towards him. ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. *, Lincoln: It's not fair. (continues to cry. Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! We don't know what we were thinking! Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! (Tears up) Our only bro. After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. Rita: WE ARE THE MOST DISGRACEFUL PEOPLE EVER!!! We're already hanging on a thread as it is! ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. NO!" ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." Now we've broken the shower." Completed Lola: Me too! No Such Luck, No Such Love (Fanfic) - TV Tropes Luna blushed. after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! This is a family moment. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. Just because of superstitions?! Lucy: Lincoln, stop! In order for him to not have "bad luck", his sisters forced him to wear a squirrel suit from Lynn's baseball game. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 I cant take a moment more of this! The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane | The loud house fanart Lincoln: Stop it! They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. Start talking. tears began to fall out their eyes. Lana: YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUR BROTHER ANYMORE AND IT'S ALL OUR FAULT!!!! Then, he opened it up. I need to hide! Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. (Groans) I'll never live this down.(covers her face). Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." ], Baseball Announcer: "Yowza." the goth girl added. "you bad luck, Lincoln!" While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Someone at front desk please respond." Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! A very, and I'm talking VERY, controversial episode of The Loud House. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! Look, I see sweaty footprints! Bad. No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. But seriously, we made a mess of everything! ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? I guess this proves it! ), (It cuts to the main street. Are you no longer grounded to the room?" ", (and that did it. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). Don't fight now! Needless to say, they were not pleased. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! Where did you get the gall to talk to us like that!? Anyway, enjoy. I hate that you don't love me anymore! Rita: Kids, your friends are here. WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. It was against the law. Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." Whats wrong? Lincoln: I hate this! Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. Everything is going wrong with the Squirrels today. Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. What kind of parents would do that? Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. Lincoln: You know what!? Anyway, here's my fanfiction. I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. Lincoln: (crying berserker tears) NO!!! Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. Angus: Oh do tell. Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. It really doesn't. Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. How convenient for me. Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. I hate golf! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. My first story is done. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" The Loud House No Such Luck FanficThe Loud House: No Such Luck Learn more. She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Later, in jail). And he did not look happy. 5 months of research ruined. So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. And after that, the whole room was silent. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. And can you please unlock my room for me? Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Not you or Lucy. So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. The Louds. Why do these three buffoons have the room. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! So, I plan to rectify that. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending - DeviantArt Especially Lynn. Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. "So," Lori started with, in an icy tone, "Let's recall what we promised you when you agreed to take us on vacation." Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino Lincoln: Well, this was cool. (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). Rita asked. Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" I thought you were my family! showing a flashback of the episode No Such Luck.
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